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There
is a storm inside her
chest; a miasma of
thundering insecurities and
flashes of despair. The irony
is, she has
astraphobia—but inside her
mismatched veins there lies a
tempest awaiting to be
set free. The most beautiful
people have the ugliest of
scars,
and hers just happen to be a
hurricane of chaotic
doubt marring the insides of her
soul.
"Astraphobia - the fear of storms."

It hasn't been a good couple of days and I needed to vent.

I'm sorry.
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fox-ninja97 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Student Writer
The most beautiful pieces are the most honest, and the fact that your willing to share your emotions with is an honor.

I'm sorry for the turbulence, however :hug:
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RunsWithBooks Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013
Plus points for using the word "miasma". I felt like the "the irony is" part was a bit too "telling" for the rest of the tone of the poem, but that's just a personal opinion.
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! I like the word miasma as well.
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chancerox Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
storms are a few of my favorite things - this poem is another :)
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. <3
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:heart: days will get good, soon. They don't stay bad forever. I'm sorry.
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, Maddie. :heart:

typed as I'm dying of what's most likely strep throat ahahahaha dammit I wanted to write all day
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M-Gray-M Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Beautiful poem! I hope things get better for you.
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:heart: Thank you.
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lonelynightrain Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful poem.
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