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fabricated gods rest between the
languid crevices of
her fingertips, scribbling profanities
all over her skin.

she's just mismatched bones
& blue bruises, telling of forbidden
love through archaic letters.

a tongue made for
wanderlust, & eyes made
for the stars,
even the devil fears her.
I don't know what it is about this one, but it just popped into my mind and I really like it.

This will most likely be my last upload before I leave for Europe--hope you guys like it.
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:iconlilyhellsing:
"a tongue made for wanderlust"...something about that just...sounds...amazing. I'm trying to make sense of it and imagine it, but I can't. Still, it sounds lovely.
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:icontheprettylightssound:
ThePrettyLightsSound Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
'The cold hands within,
Could never tell.
The stories of hell;
Oh, but she did so well.' :) Smiles of archaic match and mismatch.
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:iconecholalic-ellie:
Echolalic-Ellie Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
So beautiful.
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:iconmandatoryyesterdays:
This is possibly my favorite poem ever written. It's absolutely gorgeous. I love the words you use and how they fit so well together. This is beautiful.
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:iconflightlessheron:
flightlessheron Jun 21, 2013  Student Writer
hello, dear!

i love the line:
even the devil fears her

what an excellent way to
conclude the poem.

your diction is captivating.
the descriptions you create
flow beautifully with the piece
from beginning to end.

i don't know what to say about
this piece except that it is just
magnificent.

well done! :heart:
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:iconprussianpersephone:
PrussianPersephone Jun 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Asdfgh thank you so much! ;_; your honest and in depth comment made me happy. :)
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:iconflightlessheron:
flightlessheron Jun 22, 2013  Student Writer
i'm glad, dear! :heart:
those are the most exciting
comments to receive. (:
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:iconsammur-amat:
Sammur-amat Jun 19, 2013   General Artist
THIS IS JUST SO VERY BEAUTIFUL- YOU ARE SO VERY BEAUTIFUL :tighthug: :heart: :heart: :heart:
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:iconprussianpersephone:
PrussianPersephone Jun 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
AHHHH THANK YOU SO MUUUUCH

<3
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:iconsammur-amat:
Sammur-amat Jun 22, 2013   General Artist
MOST WELCOME, MOST WONDERFUL <3 <3 <3
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