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most nights,
it takes a war to close
my eyes, & even then i
still see monsters.

my mind is a cemetery
full of whispers
best not mentioned
(because you'd never
believe me if i told you).

i just want to be free.

to wake up with a
craving for sunshine &
supernovas nestled in my
rib cage, instead of thorns
beneath my skin & bones
between my teeth.
also known as nightmares.
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh that first stanza. :heart:
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ArchaisBeo Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I dig the flavor of this, its very alternative. Very honest.
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you c:
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Evalnia Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is so, so beautiful. You images are stunning, capturing the feeling perfectly.
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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ssensory Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Student Writer
There is so much beauty in this poem that I must say my favorite part is the whole thing. There is a lot of cleverness in this poem and I adore it. :heart:
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aw, thank you so much!
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ssensory Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Student Writer
You're very welcome! :)
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katarthis Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Even though it isn't what I would call "self-friendly", this still feels nice. Well spoken/written.

k
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. :)
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