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instead of poetry,
i want to live in
the stars;
nestled between
draco & orion,
wrapped in nebulae.

oxygen is too
suffocating. i
want to breathe in
galaxies.


neither the gods
nor my demons can
stop me —
i will make the universe
my own.
A mess of pretty words to make a simple wish more fascinating than it really is.

But I really do like this one.
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TheBloodyEpicPumpkin Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Student Writer
Hello! I just wanted to let you know that I used your title in my title poem, We Traded Our Hearts for Stars.

thebloodyepicpumpkin.deviantar…

Thank you.
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:iconkay-march:
Kay-March Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013
Simply beautiful! :D
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:iconprussianpersephone:
PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :)
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:iconkay-march:
Kay-March Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013
You're very welcome! :D
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:icondreamsinstatic:
dreamsinstatic Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013
Your fantastic work has been featured in Friday Night Features.
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:iconprussianpersephone:
PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
<3
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:icon1hellofanotaku:
1HellOfAnOtaku Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013
This is gorgeous! When you write the words seem to just flow naturally. And they paint the most wonderful pictures in my mind. Great work! <3
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:iconprussianpersephone:
PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Asdfgh thank you c: :heart:
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:iconflightlessheron:
flightlessheron Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013  Student Writer
this is stunning!

you are such an amazing
writer, dear!

i love your images and
all the beautiful creations
you make inside my mind :heart:

#LiteraryMovement
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:iconprussianpersephone:
PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
asdfgh thank you so much ;_;
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:iconflightlessheron:
flightlessheron Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013  Student Writer
of course!
you're so welcome! (:
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:iconfall-like-angels:
Fall-Like-Angels Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is beautiful. My little astrology fascination makes this even better. ^^
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:iconprussianpersephone:
PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:heart: thank you!
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Espada-Kitsuki Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*GASPS* ... I really like it.
I mean really. Really... a lot.
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:iconprussianpersephone:
PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. Really, really thank you.
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Sanddune798 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Everyone exists in their own personal universe, with which we may do as we damn well please. You wish to live amongst the stars? Dear, that power is yours.
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:iconprussianpersephone:
PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I GOT THE POWER *energizer theme plays*
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:iconsanddune798:
Sanddune798 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*dances*
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:icongoldennocturna:
GoldenNocturna Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Student Writer
I would just love to be wrapped in nebulae; it sounds warm and cozy. XD
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:iconprussianpersephone:
PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It does, doesn't it?
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:iconintricately-ordinary:
intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
it's amazing because we feel all the same things
but then it sucks because we feel all the same things :huggle:
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:iconprussianpersephone:
PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:hug: We're just amazing.
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:icondenimpanda:
DenimPanda Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013
It's a wonderful poem :)
We are young,we are the future,we CAN make the universe ours,it just takes a strong will and hard work. The only limit is the infinity -w- Lol this poem made me want to say this. Sorry.
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
asdfgh thank you very much <3
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:icondenimpanda:
DenimPanda Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013
Lol it's nothing. I just really like saying deep nonsense. It's funny and it actually makes me feel better.
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FoxWriter2 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013
It's cool,no matter how you look at it.:)
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:iconprussianpersephone:
PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Heh, thanks. :)
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PrussiaXAustria1000 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Student Writer
Love it. Spectacularly done.
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:iconprussianpersephone:
PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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:iconprussiaxaustria1000:
PrussiaXAustria1000 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Student Writer
GermanyXItaly1000 always did say that your writing was excellently written.

That might have been an understatement.
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Ag-Wolf Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013
This is another very well done piece, but the Artist's Comment resonates more for me, oddly. I find it to be a rather fitting description of alot of writing, good or bad. But maybe that's just me. :shrug:
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:iconprussianpersephone:
PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. :) Very much.
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:iconmapelie:
mapelie Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You used my favourite word so beautifully.
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:iconprussianpersephone:
PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Which word is that? :)
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:iconmapelie:
mapelie Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Galaxy. ^^
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:iconfindmyface:
findmyface Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
So much I want to go there.
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:iconprussianpersephone:
PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I shall bring you too.
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:iconfindmyface:
findmyface Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yes! Off we go!
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:iconprussianpersephone:
PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
CASSI

GRAB MY POEMS
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:iconfindmyface:
findmyface Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
*Grabs Poems, RAINBOWS AWAY!*
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:iconprussianpersephone:
PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
omg yis thank you for getting that A THOUSAND LOVES :heart:
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:iconfindmyface:
findmyface Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Infinite Loves Back!
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:iconchancerox:
chancerox Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
can i live there with you?
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:iconprussianpersephone:
PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
yes, precious child. /takes you with and feed you stardust
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:iconchancerox:
chancerox Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
/eats all the stardust

... oops no more stars. :omg:
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:iconstarlightshoals:
StarlightShoals Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Student Writer
<3
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:iconprussianpersephone:
PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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UnluckyNumberXIII Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is gorgeous! I love this.
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:iconprussianpersephone:
PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much. :heart:
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UnluckyNumberXIII Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Welcome~
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