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certain things in my mind
would be better left unsaid,
such as:

    i. how I stared at a bottle of pills for an hour as if they would slide down my throat on their own. ii. when I stepped out of the shower with bloody knees and didn't bother to put a band aid over them.   iii. why I can't keep a smile long enough for someone to take my picture. iv. who I wanted to be when I was a little girl and who I am right here and now.     v. where I tried to jump off a bridge and landed in water deep enough for me to swim in. vi. what I wanted to scream at you that day but I just stayed silent and hoped you would forget.


no more pretty words and
ludicrous metaphors
today; just life,
the truth, and everything
that I never want to tell
anyone else.
Bad things happened yesterday and I ended up hurting those that I couldn't bear to lose. I'm sorry.
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TwilightPoetess Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hello!

I have used the title of this lovely deviation in a Found Poetry piece ( or Title Poem for #TheTitlePage ) here:


Thank you so much! :heart:
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miserabel Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hello! I've used the title of this piece in a title poem right here. Tell me if you don't want your title used, and I'll take it down.
Keep writing! :jedi:
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Story-of-a-Mind Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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FierySpark Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so beautiful ^u^ glad to know that you're feeling a little better now :hug: Sometimes ya just need to get it out ^^
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LadyBrookeCelebwen Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:hug: This is certainly honest and well written - I'm glad you feel confident enough to write them down. The idea of things that should have been unsaid is something I can certainly relate to.
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's not so much confidence as it is the need to get it out :) But thank you.
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LadyBrookeCelebwen Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome :)
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chancerox Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
sometimes it feels so incredible to just honestly vent without all the prettiness and abstractness. this is so wonderfully raw. i'm here for you if your need me.
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so very much. <3
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SteampunkTigerlily Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hugs 2 U
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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Espada-Kitsuki Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
... Well, I hope that those people will realize that you didn't mean it. I've lost so many friends, and my mind stays in a state where it thinks I'll lose them all no matter how much I love them... I think I've hurt others a lot more than I should've.

I really really really hope things start going well for you soon, otherwise I'll have to wait a few years until I can travel on my own and then purchase a plane ticket to Iowa.

I'll be sending some hope your way. (And I hope it does some good. :))
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I've lost a LOT of friends as well, to be honest...

Thank you. :heart:
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MarieRedCarrot Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*hug* It's okay. I was once shaving and I got scared because I had a cut on my knee.
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That happens to me all the time because I shave too fast. :|
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YumeHoshiChan Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013

Are you feeling better now though? *holds out arms for a hug*

 

We're all here for you.

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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yes. I am. :hug:
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:huggle: there's always someone there for you
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:heart: I know. :)
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crystallized-skies Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:

If you ever need to talk...
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I think I'm better now...
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riddlemewitless Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
this is really beautiful. 
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I am glad you think so. :heart:
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Sometimesyousuck123 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Student General Artist
*HUGS* I am working on the pic. Down to coloring. And I own you it. And you really need.......ice cream. sat.
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :hug:
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Sometimesyousuck123 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Student General Artist
No problemo! But ice cream sat right now.
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Fall-Like-Angels Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:hug: I hope today is better. The 'tomorrows' are always the hardest. At least for me.
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. <3
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Working-on-it Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Student General Artist
d'awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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Shoeborn Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Student General Artist
*hug*
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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Shoeborn Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Student General Artist
Random thing I wrote; the phrase kept popping up as I read this.
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