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certain things in my mind
would be better left unsaid,
such as:

    i. how I stared at a bottle of pills for an hour as if they would slide down my throat on their own. ii. when I stepped out of the shower with bloody knees and didn't bother to put a band aid over them.   iii. why I can't keep a smile long enough for someone to take my picture. iv. who I wanted to be when I was a little girl and who I am right here and now.     v. where I tried to jump off a bridge and landed in water deep enough for me to swim in. vi. what I wanted to scream at you that day but I just stayed silent and hoped you would forget.


no more pretty words and
ludicrous metaphors
today; just life,
the truth, and everything
that I never want to tell
anyone else.
Bad things happened yesterday and I ended up hurting those that I couldn't bear to lose. I'm sorry.
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TwilightPoetess Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hello!

I have used the title of this lovely deviation in a Found Poetry piece ( or Title Poem for #TheTitlePage ) here:


Thank you so much! :heart:
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miserabel Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hello! I've used the title of this piece in a title poem right here. Tell me if you don't want your title used, and I'll take it down.
Keep writing! :jedi:
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Story-of-a-Mind Jul 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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FierySpark Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so beautiful ^u^ glad to know that you're feeling a little better now :hug: Sometimes ya just need to get it out ^^
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LadyBrookeCelebwen Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:hug: This is certainly honest and well written - I'm glad you feel confident enough to write them down. The idea of things that should have been unsaid is something I can certainly relate to.
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PrussianPersephone Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's not so much confidence as it is the need to get it out :) But thank you.
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LadyBrookeCelebwen Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome :)
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chancerox Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
sometimes it feels so incredible to just honestly vent without all the prettiness and abstractness. this is so wonderfully raw. i'm here for you if your need me.
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PrussianPersephone Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so very much. <3
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SteampunkTigerlily Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hugs 2 U
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