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Every morning,
she wakes up to a
hollow chest & stormy,
red rimmed eyes.

It's so easy to be in love
with being in love;
swallowing fake truths
& sincere lies.

But her heart—
it forgot how to smile
two years ago,
because no one can tell
the difference between
imitations & reality.

"Please,
please find me;
I'm lost between the cracks of
dying stars."


Desperate to breathe
yet wondering how it would feel
to drown,
she's never belonged
in this universe.
Or any other universe, for that matter.
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Claireluvs1D Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Lovely work. :heart:
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EphemeralMonochrome Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  New member Hobbyist General Artist
"Swallowing in fake truths and sincere lies"
How perfectly somber...
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LilyHellsing Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014
Tsk...always the outcast.
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BlueSoul5 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wow, this is full of emotion. It is beautifully written and I got that feeling once. well done your poetry is amazing. 
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wolfdino8 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love this it seems very personal to a lot of people it's amazing
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AllonsyCat755 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is really good. It  describes the feeling I once had, and still partially do. Really deep and meaningful.
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fox-ninja97 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Student Writer
A long time ago (it at least FEELS like a long time ago), I was really unhappy, just because I didn't like myself and figured no one else really did either. I'd see a car drive by and I would wonder what would happen if I stepped in front of it. If it would swerve and miss me. If it would hit me. If it would hurt. If I'd die... If I'd care. I knew that I would, that I wasn't really suicidal. That there were things I wanted to do and people I would meet and that none of it would happen if I got myself hit by a car. But I couldn't help but wonder. The last stanza just reminded me of that...

This was really beautiful :)
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AngelOfPh34r Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013   General Artist
brilliant.
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chancerox Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm lost between the cracks of
dying stars.
--
powerful beyond measure love. :heart:
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much. :heart:
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