literature

bioluminescence.

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Your skin is of paper mache and
stardust, so fragile and coruscating
as I reach out desperately to grasp that
supernova you call a heart;
please, don't etiolate in their sunrise
and leave me marooned in life's black abyss...
I can't survive without your—
Feel free to interpret this in anyway possible, because all I did was suddenly form this in my head and write it down. It's way different than my normal "style," and I have no idea where it came from. It just popped in my brain, said hello, and I decided to catch it before it dissolved.

Can this even be considered a poem?
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LupiniunStar's avatar
This is so beautiful, and so ripe for interpretation.

A great thing about many poems is that they can be interpreted how a reader wants to interpret them. You've gotten that down with this.

And even if you don't know what it means, maybe you subconsciously do? Sorry, that's corny, isn't it?