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are my words poetic enough for you?

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maybe not.

because i will never be the fire-hearted girl with remedial stardust lips,
dancing with the astral wolves that hunt beneath her moon-kissed skin,
with the courage to plant wilting lilacs into every crippled soul she finds.

but what if they were?

then i would be the ink blots coating the archives of humankind,
the fractured jewel tucked away in a catastrophic dragon's chest,
and the lyric every mismatched bone engraves into their marrow.

if only.
Prompt #30 of *DearPoetry's NaPoWriMo prompt list [link].

Obviously I'm not partaking in NaPoWriMo, but I saw this prompt and thought, "Well. This could be therapeutic."

And so while I'm trying not to dwell on the constant bullshit that I feel I've been doused in, I jotted this pathetic crap down in some semblance to make me feel better.

Have fun deciphering this. Though I think it's pretty damn obvious.
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SteampunkTigerlily's avatar
HEY!!! Your writing is beautiful and very good. You shouldn't have such a low opinion of yourself and your work because you have a real gift. This particular poem just proves it, and is in no way pathetic crap. (I'm trying to be encouraging here, I hope I don't come across as mean). Don't knock your work, it is brilliant.