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I want to create an aromatic sea of jasmines
and stardust mountains of silver and —

No.

Inkblot skeletons with paper mache
hearts, whose bones shall burn with one glance at the
sun; gravestones of blood diamonds and tears of thistles...

Harp strings ringing in grotesque harmony, screaming
for slender fingers to pluck and caress with devotion.

I want to write

    gods


and

    chaos.
:iconprussianpersephone:
I'll cease with spamming you all with dumb and worthless writing this week, now.

This actually has a deeper meaning.

I'll just keep that to myself.

New styles are fun to play around with.

Why did this make the front page. I don't get it.

Well...I edited the format a bit, because it made it flow better in my eyes...yeah....
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~Erin-Watson Feb 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Just completely awesome, x
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~epicbleachfan998 Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I think I have an idea what this poem means. Or maybe that's just my own opinion. This. This is deep. That's what I'll say for now. Excuse me while I go sit somewhere in awe over the beauty of your poetry. I'm so glad to be one of your watchers. :happycry:
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*PrussianPersephone Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aha, thank you so much.
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~epicbleachfan998 Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
You're very welcome~! :huggle:
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*GermanyXItaly1000 Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
... I hope I'm not the only one who see the brilliance in this piece, am I?

Love the format! The writing, as usual, is deep, metaphoric, and completely you!
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*PrussianPersephone Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much!
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~Mauvaiseloup Jan 27, 2013  Student General Artist
Dude, your poetry...! This is awesome!
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*PrussianPersephone Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Ehe, thanks.
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~Celestrai Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This seems to be about putting on a beautiful facade (the writing about seas of jasmines) to hide your truer desires/self.
I could be wrong.
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*PrussianPersephone Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Perhaps... :)
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