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Sometimes I like to pretend that
I'm God, putting a pen to
paper and scripting out someone's
life like a puppeteer.

Maybe if I
wrote the epilogue in
my own blood, the
screams inside my
head wouldn't be as
loud.

"They aren't
real," is just an excuse
for killing off their
loved ones; I want to feel
their agony tenfold (because I
deserve to think I'm as heartless
as I feel).
Another one of my secret series poems.

The secret: "I like to make my characters in my stories suffer because I feel like I deserve it."

My secret blog is here: [link]

I really like this one because I related to it.
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livefree33 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Woah. This is really deep. Love it
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Kreatress Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
MY. LIFE.
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FAIRYTAIL1O1 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Student General Artist
My god. i feel the exact same way when i write
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ShelbytheMisfit Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing analogy. I have contemplated this very thing before. You put it into perfect words!
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ShadowofEmrys Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Perfect. This is perfect. And every writer who has ever written something great have played god. 
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :) And yeah, I think they have.
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fox-ninja97 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Student Writer
I think every writer plays God every one in a while (I do all the time and I'm ruthless more often than not ^^; )

This is... Really, really perfect.
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, I think you're right.

Thanks. :)
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LadyNeytiri Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Student General Artist
...wow!
This is amazing! ^_^
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much. :heart:
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LadyNeytiri Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Student General Artist
No problem! :heart:
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FierySpark Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Just... Wow! This is so beautiful. It just strikes some chord in me :clap:
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
<3 thank you.
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FierySpark Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh! umm.. can you look at a poem I made?? i don't have membership, so critiques aren't an option ^-^"
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Send me a note with the one you want me to look at and I will when I get the chance to. :)
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FierySpark Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ok ^u^
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crystallized-skies Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconclapplz:
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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chancerox Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
the second stanza. woah.
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I like that one too.
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imdangel Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Well, writer are the god f their own world
I must say, I like this. I can relate to that, characters are meant to die. Even us, we are the characters of this world and eventually we'll like nothing happens :)
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Exactly. :)
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CrumbledWings Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013
hahaha woooo so sadistic i love it :D (speaks to me so well, i love to kill off characters). You just won a watch from me.
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! <3
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EpicEmoSkittles Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013
:O This reminds me of Light from death note... SO MUCH..
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, never got into that one.
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Ag-Wolf Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013
Damn WELL DONE. This is just amazing! That's a fascinating topic for a poem (haha yeah I feel like that too) and you did it justice perfectly. :clap:
Bravo, madame. :iconepicclapplz:
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you c: I really liked it.
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Shoeborn Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013  Student General Artist
I think most writers can relate to this...."SUFFER PUPPETS SUFFER >8D" and then later "what have I done ;n;"
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh my God I know.
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InterrogateMe Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013   Writer
Wow, you've left me in awe once again. I love this <3
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you c:
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suemao Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013
That was so perfect C: you're such an amazing writer!!
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad you liked it. :heart: Thank you.
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suemao Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013
:glomp: I like everything you write!
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Miellat Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013  Student Writer
This is amazing, awesome job! :iconsylveonplz:
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:heart: Thank you!
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Miellat Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013  Student Writer
You are totally welcome! :iconlaplz:
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
i think you portrayed the secret perfectly, this is wonderful. very original. i especially love " I want to feel their agony tenfold (because I deserve to think I'm as heartless as I feel). "
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! I really did like how this one turned out and I liked the "style" I used for it. <3
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TheEmptyChest Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013
This is wicked, and I can so relate to it. I once said to a friend of mine (a fellow writer), "You know what I love most about writing? The fact that it allows me to play God."

He agreed. :D
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That definitely is a perk of writing...being a god pretty much. :)
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TheEmptyChest Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013
Absolutely. :nod:
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