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Sometimes I like to pretend that
I'm God, putting a pen to
paper and scripting out someone's
life like a puppeteer.

Maybe if I
wrote the epilogue in
my own blood, the
screams inside my
head wouldn't be as
loud.

"They aren't
real," is just an excuse
for killing off their
loved ones; I want to feel
their agony tenfold (because I
deserve to think I'm as heartless
as I feel).
Another one of my secret series poems.

The secret: "I like to make my characters in my stories suffer because I feel like I deserve it."

My secret blog is here: [link]

I really like this one because I related to it.
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livefree33 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Woah. This is really deep. Love it
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Kreatress Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
MY. LIFE.
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FAIRYTAIL1O1 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Student General Artist
My god. i feel the exact same way when i write
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ShelbytheMisfit Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing analogy. I have contemplated this very thing before. You put it into perfect words!
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ShadowofEmrys Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Perfect. This is perfect. And every writer who has ever written something great have played god. 
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :) And yeah, I think they have.
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fox-ninja97 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Student Writer
I think every writer plays God every one in a while (I do all the time and I'm ruthless more often than not ^^; )

This is... Really, really perfect.
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, I think you're right.

Thanks. :)
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LadyNeytiri Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Student General Artist
...wow!
This is amazing! ^_^
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much. :heart:
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