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There is a desert beneath her eyes
Dry, desolate, despairing
Devoid of life; devoid of emotion; devoid of hope;
Now just a broken ravine carved by sorrow
Now just a barren canyon chiseled by fear
Now just a fragmented chasm sculpted by dread
Now just a tearless void
Of emptiness
I don't have much to say on this one. Playing with symbolism, I suppose. Maybe it's based on my emotions considering the mood I am currently in. I just kind of wrote.
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LupiniunStar Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013
Wow. I think this is really good. Crying so much you have no tears, or being so upset you actually can't cry...I really wish things like that never happened to anyone.
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BlacK-Kat9 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I felt like I was being sucked dry by a draw
That's pretty good.
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ShinaNyan Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012
Oh my, this is really hearty... That make sense?



....I WATCHED RISE OF THE GUARDIANS!!! WOO-HOO!!!!

I now understand your feels! ;^;
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. Yes, it makes sense.

Good. I am glad you understand the intense amount of feels.
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ShinaNyan Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012
>w< Hehe~
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mchastert Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012
Very nice.
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
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CrazyCharlette1415 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It's good to play with everything once in a while. I like how you portrayed that sometimes no tears mean no soul.
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks--that's what I was trying to go for.
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autumn--thunder Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Student General Artist
I love the symbolism you use in these poems, because they can be interpreted in so many different ways~

And it's good to express your emotions through emotion rather than bottle it up. It's probably more healthy.
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