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She has suns for eyes,
and oceans for tears,
a blade of grass for each hair,
and wisdom beyond her years.
Rage like an earthquake,
sorrow as deep as the sea,
madness funneled like a hurricane,
joy blooming so vividly, kings fall to their knee.
Her skin is a motley,
with hues so dark and bright,
she sleeps during the day,
and lays awake at night.
She has the universe for a heart,
and the cosmos burn in her soul,
however, humanity's blindness,
is at last taking its toll.
Literature
Constructive Criticism
"Tell me what you think."
"Of the poem?"
"No, of my face. Yes, the poem."
"I was going to say, because your face is just stupid."
"Very funny. Read."
"..."
"What did you think?"
"Why did you write this?"
"I wrote it for you."
"For me?"
"Yes."
"You make me self conscious when you say things like that."
"I know."
"I'm not worth this you know."
"What does that mean?"
"I am half a girl, and I deserve half a poem."
"That is not true, and you still haven't told me what you really thought about it."
"It's as broken and complex and half hearted as a sad song about the way you feel ink trail between your fingers like it's blood. There
Literature
Mabon
there are dead leaves
sprouting from her amber spine,
reaching with child-fingers
to devour the sun.
her skin is freezing,
seeping winter through
november pores.
seeking warmth,
the whiskey tongues
of godless boys
wish to decipher
the atlas of her thighs.
counting the sleepy fireflies
alight in her lungs- there is
wanderlust churning & warming
her frostbitten heartstrings.
swinging pendulum hips,
"I am the tease of autumn flames.
I breathe in mint sunsets,
& gasoline dreams."
Literature
Green Ink
She writes with green ink
eternal scrawls upon the page.
She wrote with green ink,
because it was the color of his eyes,
and the pond in the park,
and the seats on the bus,
and the grass outside,
and rose stems.
She wrote with green ink
even when her boss yelled
and the teacher screamed
and nothing worked out.
Because green was her favorite
and it was his favorite as well
even when he was sick while
his skin was green.
He still loved the color green
when the dirt fell down
when he didn’t recover,
the grass that bloomed
was the most angelic jade.
And she still wrote in green ink
because it was the color of the grass,
and his favori
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I just took my LA honors semester final and bombed the hell out of it because the teacher never gave our class the extensive study guides she did the others, so...
Here's the poem I had to write for the last bit of the final. Basically, the test was over a shit ton of stuff, the last sections being Poe, Whitman, and Dickinson. We had to write a poem that emulated the styles of one of those three poets.
I tried doing Poe with the internal rhyme, but I obviously failed. I can't be all sophisticated with my poems. Bleh.
Anyway. A tribute to the earth. It's bad. But hey, I only had ten minutes to do it. So I'm not complaining.
Also, "Mother Earth" by Within Temptation is an amazing song.
Here's the poem I had to write for the last bit of the final. Basically, the test was over a shit ton of stuff, the last sections being Poe, Whitman, and Dickinson. We had to write a poem that emulated the styles of one of those three poets.
I tried doing Poe with the internal rhyme, but I obviously failed. I can't be all sophisticated with my poems. Bleh.
Anyway. A tribute to the earth. It's bad. But hey, I only had ten minutes to do it. So I'm not complaining.
Also, "Mother Earth" by Within Temptation is an amazing song.
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Last stanza is really great!