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Aaand this was made for my faves. Straight to my core, wonderful job. I think you captured your plane feelings really well, it was a good idea to write it down as the feeling was fresh. Gah, I want to fly again, the feeling of ascension really has no equal.
I'm going to start by saying I like the font. It lends an interesting feeling to the poem. Then come the words which are nothing short of gorgeous. I love how this can be interpreted by the reader to find their own meaning
YOU MUST TEACH ME YOUR METHODS. I require your way with words.
It's beautiful, isn't it? The sight outside the window of a plane in flight. Did you get to look out during the night too? I've heard you can see the planets the way we see the moon on the ground. It must be sooo... *sigh*
Ahem. Anyway, I think it goes without saying that I liked this piece.