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I have something to say to a certain someone. Someone who I know will read this. Do you want to know what my secret is--even though it isn't much of a secret to the person this is meant for?

I hate you.

I hate you because you're always lying, always pretending everything is okay and just making up excuse after excuse.

I hate you because you can't just suck it up and stop being such a child, trying to make everyone else just as miserable as you.

I hate you because you never seem to do your best anymore, even though you insist time after time that you are.

I hate you because you're pathetic and weak, and you're too terrified to go through with the things you constantly swear you're going to do.

I hate you because you want to think that the entire world is out to get you, and you refuse to attempt to make life a little easier for yourself.

I hate you because you can't stop complaining instead of trying to make things better.

I hate you because you know your smiles and laughs are just illusions to make it seem like you're all right, instead of just giving up and letting everyone know just what exactly is going on in your head.

But most of all? I think I hate what you are because of what name I have to give you; what you will always be called in my mind.

Actually, I think what I hate the most is that this is all true.

Uploading this on my aunt's computer after a Thanksgiving from hell. Still in Illinois. I can't wait to go home. Even though things there are shit too.

Don't mind me, just in an extremely bad mood and need to vent.

Edit: ...uh...guys...? this so popular? Seriously, it's...just me being a whiny little doesn't deserve all the views and whatnot...thanks, but...really, go give all your praise to a piece that deserves it. I'm not going to reply to comments on this one, but...they do mean something to me. This is a piece that I just don't want to comment on. Especially since it does not deserve so much hype.
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AilackedPl Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2014
I hate you too ;D
AilackedPl Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014
That is exactly what i think about myself.
LupiniunStar Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013
Oh, wow.

I...actually didn't see the twist coming at the end.

Thank you for sharing this and making such a beautiful, heart-wrenching poem out of this.

Though you hate yourself, you're my friend. And just so you know, this was amazing.
iHeartAnime-Manga Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013
I feel a connection. ; - ;
Angel10000 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2013
U can vent on me whenever u want iam use to it.... thanks.
Rissy-Sakura2ko Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
bluelady1927 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
me reading it halfway throught: 'holy shit!! this person is so me!! she hates me!!'
me finished reading it: 'oh... it's herself... wait what?'
xnekomancer Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lol I thought this person was me too
Karaxxlumexxar13 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
Oh. My. God. This is amazing. I can relate so much to this.

You my dear, are an awesome writer. I love your stories and poem-things. You're always so good at putting feeling into your work and I just- gah.

I love it
PunkAngel892 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I understand how you feel.
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