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Pomegranate seeds
have the most
bitter of tastes.

She is more
than a myth,
you know;
and untainted,
a spring's
breeze with
the most
of lips.

There are more
flames beneath her
skin than in all of
Hades. With every
breath she takes,
winter cries out
for redemption.

She is magenta.

A maiden of
jasper and agate;
lily eyelashes and
locks of supple ivy.

His goddess:
a hyacinth among
weeds and sweet
harvest among
the wretched.

A product of writer's block.

I think those who've been watching me since the beginning know I have the biggest girl crush on Persephone (hence my username) and that she is my patron goddess. I adore her. I adore Hades. They are my mythological OTP. ignore that

So...yeah. Persephone is perfect.

The one other poem I made for her long ago kind of sucked and I felt like she needed a new dedication. <3

edited it a bit because lowercase looked dumb
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I have no words. This seriously was gorgeous and breathtaking and took my breath away. Wonderful, wonderful job. I couldn't find any mistakes as far as grammatical or spelling issues. Just phenomenal. I love how this is about Persephone, I love all Greek mythology so anything about it fascinates me. Wonderful job on capturing her in this piece, seriously. I know I'm ranting a bit but this deserves it, this piece is too beautiful. Amazing, you should do more work in honor of the Greeks, you are perfect for it just because of this piece. You've drawn me in, now I want to go check out more of your work! Nice job :)
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Throughout the whole poem, I noticed your use of adjectives that describe the colour purple, and I love purple, it's a good colour. And all the references to Persephone.

"Pomegranate seeds have the most bitter of tastes." - Referring to how, in Greek Mythology, the human Persephone ate a pomegranate and fell into Hell.

"There are more flames beneath her skin than in all of Hades."- Referring to the literal nightmare she can't escape.

"His goddess: eternal, unwavering- a hyacinth among weeds and sweet
harvest among the wretched." That might be referencing how Persephone is human and Hades is not.

Your work is just so fantastic and breath-taking. So many words can describe it, no words are able to. I truly expect so many great things from you. You're going to go far, very, VERY far in life :)
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LilyHellsing Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014
God...yes. Just...dear god, YES.
I've always loved Persephone as well -- in fact, my real name is Steffanie :P After her, haha. Her and then Hades...
This poem was just....I can imagine a beautiful scene and person, just...YES. Lol, I can't even begin to express my thoughts on this. Just, amazing. Thank you for sharing it!
SharpPointyThings Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Student General Artist
I have a patron from most pantheons and most are war gods. The Morrigan, Athena and Tyr 
WolfxButterfly Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Student Writer
God I love Persephone so much (Hades too, but mostly her.) This is perfect! :heart:
lifeuncommon Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2013
 I always feel kind of sorry for Demeter though. :(

As soon as I saw the title and the mention of pomegranate in the thumbnail I knew immediately whom would star in the poem. ^^  As another lover of Greek mythology, and drawer-upon of its imagery in poetry now and hereafter, I :salute: .

By the by, Antisally sells a perfume she created inspired by the story called Can't Wait Demeter on her website Goth Rosary dot com.  It's been years since I smelled it, and I preferred Samhain, but I remember 'Demeter being nice too. :)
littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013  Student Writer
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Your stunning work has been featured here…! :heart:
AbbyMeyer Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013
This is so awesome! I love Greek mythology and think you've really done Persephone justice. :)
PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you <3
DarkLover33 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013   Writer
Love it!
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