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she wishes for a heart of ice

a heart to hide her fears

she wishes for a heart of ice

a heart to freeze her tears




but if her heart of ice meets fire

then perhaps it will thaw

for if her heart of ice meets fire

she will surely pour out her emotions raw

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I don't know where this one came from.

I guess it's from the point of view of an original character I created long ago, that I will never use.

She just wanted to hide her heart away, but if she meets him, that all will change.

Maybe I'll make it into an actual story someday. Who knows.

AND LOOK I MADE IT RHYME. I'M SO PROUD OF MYSELF.

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~worldpeaceismine Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
See! You are an AMAZING writer!!!!!
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~GuardianOfTheElement Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
After reading this last night it inspired me to write three poems of my own. Sad part is I wrote them all under ten minutes. I really like this. It's beautiful.
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*PrussianPersephone Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It doesn't matter how long or short it takes you to write things. As long as you write them from the heart.

But thank you.
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~GuardianOfTheElement Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Your welcome.
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:icondbstrickland1962:
So much depth and emotion, that is what poetry is, all I can say "my hat is off to a great piece". I would not change a word, because it is you and touches each individual in a unique way. Thanks for sharing.
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*PrussianPersephone Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much.
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:icondenimpanda:
It's really beautiful,sometimes I wish I had a heart of ice,so life wouldn't be so...difficult
...Even though I'm just 15 and I know my problems are stupid
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*PrussianPersephone Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Don't worry. I'm sixteen and I share the same thoughts.
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~CrazyCharlette1415 Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
The second verse oddly reminds me of a romance fanfic I read somewhere a while ago; the main character (female) hides behind an expressionless mask (mentally, not physically) to shield herself from the world and when she meets a special man, he effortlessly takes away her mask and teaches her to control her emotions. Now, I'm not comparing you, but simply saying that this poem reminds me that things can sometimes happen.
YOU MADE IT RHYME! LOOK AT IT PEOPLES!
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*PrussianPersephone Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yes. I made it rhyme.

Fuck yeah.
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