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only the most
beautiful of creatures
live the shortest.

red roses and quivering
butterflies and other
useless things, like the
way she wishes on every star
she sees for a different
soul because she can't stand
the way it's rotting inside.

and it's only when
the thorns beneath her skin
start to bleed that her
monsters whisper, "have
you ever trembled, my dear?"

because they know
for every whimper that hides
faintly in the dark,
there is a pair of lips stretched
into a smile pretending
that all that is beautiful
is timeless and unbroken.
Hey guys, I'm not dead. I just can't write anymore. Here's a thing I've been trying to write for a week now. It's bad. I know. I just need to write something and post it. I'm sorry.

Sometimes life really isn't fair and wishes won't ever come true.


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Moonstripe2 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
It's not bad,it's really good.In a way it speaks the truth.And the truth  can sometimes always the hardest thing to write/come about.
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Dogviolet Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014
This is absolutely amazing! It is beautifully written, very poignant and emotive; but it never becomes silly or soppy. Beautiful. :)
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ArtBlog-Nerd Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
What are you saying, dear? This is amazing~
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014   General Artist
what are you talking about, brigdet darling? this is such a poignant piece! :heart:
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DarkLover33 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014   Writer
Awww! why do you think its bad? I think this is really really beautiful! You have such a lovely way of writing, please dont stop
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xxXxBrokenxAngelxXxx Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Student Writer
It isnt bad. Its very beautifully written. Stay strong dear. And keep writing.
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CelestialMemories Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is stunning. The third strophe really took my breath away. Beautiful job. :clap:
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Roshiray Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014
the melancholic feeling makes my throat close up..i really love this ..Heart +fav 
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Nooooo you have to breathe with that
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Roshiray Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014
grinning,i'm still alive :D i loved the poem..
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