I absolutely love this. It flows perfectly, and the seperation of the lines works wonderfully. The second stanza hit me as all too true. The third stands the same way, and the last has beautiful imagery. Overall, amazing.
I love this. And if I ever visit. I will post random pictures of me and horses. I love horses. And I like my plot. If the gods want to mess with me, the universe already hates me, so they need to jump on the bandwagon.