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her soul is a rose

scarlet and full of sharp thorns

can she trim the barbs?
Another haiku-thing. And this one is kind of nature-y.

I don't really know where this one came from. I guess...I'm trying to say people guard what's truly in their souls, but sometimes we just need to find the garden shears and hack off all those thorns.

Sleeping Beauty title reference ftw.
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LupiniunStar Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013
Oh great, another haiku! You're good at these. But then again, you're good with your freestyle ones too!

And I understand what you're saying with this poem. And it makes sense. Absolute sense.
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CrazyCharlette1415 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Got the reference, and I think it fits nicely. I agree with what you say...
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, glad you think so.
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I really like your poetry~
It's all really quite lovely!
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
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drawn2pencils Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Scarlet, a color of beauty and warning. Thought inspiring as was clearly the intent. Very, very nice.
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, that was kind of my intention.
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findmyface Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Really cool I like how the last line makes me wonder in thought and I love when poems do that.
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
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fizzyCoke Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012
this is very beautiful :-)
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