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her soul is a rose

scarlet and full of sharp thorns

can she trim the barbs?
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Another haiku-thing. And this one is kind of nature-y.

I don't really know where this one came from. I guess...I'm trying to say people guard what's truly in their souls, but sometimes we just need to find the garden shears and hack off all those thorns.

Sleeping Beauty title reference ftw.
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~CrazyCharlette1415 Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Got the reference, and I think it fits nicely. I agree with what you say...
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*PrussianPersephone Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, glad you think so.
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I really like your poetry~
It's all really quite lovely!
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*PrussianPersephone Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
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Mood: Love ~thought2reality Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Scarlet, a color of beauty and warning. Thought inspiring as was clearly the intent. Very, very nice.
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*PrussianPersephone Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, that was kind of my intention.
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~findmyface Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Really cool I like how the last line makes me wonder in thought and I love when poems do that.
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*PrussianPersephone Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
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this is very beautiful :-)
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*PrussianPersephone Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, glad you think so.
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