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She is the winter's heart
and a January zephyr—
amethyst ankles frozen in time.

(eleven stars circulate her glacial ribs)

Forever shin-deep in the seas of
a conformed humanity,
she shall always sanctify the stains.
That awkward moment when you don't have anything meaningful to say in a description other than I'm glad this wasn't a depressing piece like the last few have been, and I quite like it.



Partly dedicated to =kushamisaru, a loyal watcher of mine and a fellow Aquarius. Told you I'd write a poem like this some day.
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bellavette Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014
My gods! This is brilliant, BRILLIANT I tell you! Short, simple free verse poem, and yet it encompasses the very core of an Aquarius: a visionary, an eccentric, the square peg, the one who "sanctifies the stains".

Hello from a fellow Aquarius Hi! Heart 
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camelopardalisinblue Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I really love the alliteration in this!
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kiddopolis Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013  Student Writer
/shows no emotion because capricorns don't do that apparently/

Anyway, this was really nicely done. (:
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Hetalia-Spain Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
((This is beautiful~ :D And really nice of you!

Sadly, I'm a Virgo. A proud one though. ;u; ))
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much! If I wasn't lazy I'd write one for each horoscope.
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Hetalia-Spain Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
((You're very welcome! And hooray for laziness! :icondummywooplz:))
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deer-princess Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013
So proud of being an Aquarius! ;u;
Though, some people say I'm Pisces..
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Booooo. They don't know their astrology then.
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Saphira12702 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013
Yeah! Go Aquariuses! Anyways.....great poem! :D
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aquarian pride! <3
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