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She is the winter's heart
and a January zephyr—
amethyst ankles frozen in time.

(eleven stars circulate her glacial ribs)

Forever shin-deep in the seas of
a conformed humanity,
she shall always sanctify the stains.
That awkward moment when you don't have anything meaningful to say in a description other than I'm glad this wasn't a depressing piece like the last few have been, and I quite like it.



Partly dedicated to =kushamisaru, a loyal watcher of mine and a fellow Aquarius. Told you I'd write a poem like this some day.
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Lupineborn Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This poem is another reason to be a proud Aquarius :meow:
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bellavette Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014
My gods! This is brilliant, BRILLIANT I tell you! Short, simple free verse poem, and yet it encompasses the very core of an Aquarius: a visionary, an eccentric, the square peg, the one who "sanctifies the stains".

Hello from a fellow Aquarius Hi! Heart 
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camelopardalisinblue Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I really love the alliteration in this!
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kiddopolis Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013
/shows no emotion because capricorns don't do that apparently/

Anyway, this was really nicely done. (:
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Hetalia-Spain Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
((This is beautiful~ :D And really nice of you!

Sadly, I'm a Virgo. A proud one though. ;u; ))
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much! If I wasn't lazy I'd write one for each horoscope.
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Hetalia-Spain Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
((You're very welcome! And hooray for laziness! :icondummywooplz:))
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spookbaby Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
So proud of being an Aquarius! ;u;
Though, some people say I'm Pisces..
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Booooo. They don't know their astrology then.
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Saphira12702 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013
Yeah! Go Aquariuses! Anyways.....great poem! :D
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aquarian pride! <3
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KennieKongLee Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Gosh, so cool!
I love it! It's so deep and pretty, Wow!
Hooray Aquarian Pride! :happybounce:
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Woohoo Aquarius!
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CrazyCharlette1415 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aquarius~ A lovely sign! :D

Damnit why am I Scorpio
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
BECAUSE YOU ARE NOT COOL ENOUGH. :3
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CrazyCharlette1415 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
X3
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vellusz Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Nice images.
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
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Rainatmosphere Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
(d'awww I'm a leo. No wonder I'm so positive all the time?)

I really enjoyed this a lot because it was light. I find this change a good transition.

Good job! *thumbs up*
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Then you are this man:

[link]
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Rainatmosphere Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
God dammit Bridge.

I look gorgeous.
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findmyface Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Love, love, love it!
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
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kushamisaru Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
WHY IS IT NOT POSSIBLE TO WATCH PEOPLE MULTIPLE TIMES, DAMNIT?!

And the description... I was like "What? Really? Me?!(partially)" *giggles like a madwoman*

Ahem.

I feel like I should also point out I can really relate to this, especially the conforming part. It wasn't till like... 10th grade that I truly learned that lesson, and became a people pleaser. Which is something else an Aquarian might do, just...maybe not to the same extent.

I'm gonna advertise the hell out of this now. K? K.
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
K.

I'm glad you liked this, though! I still can't get over the fact that I really do a lot of things that Aquariuses are said to do, and the qualities we have. So I kind of just smashed those together.

WATER BEARERS FTW.
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kushamisaru Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:D it is done!

Yeah, same here. It's almost scary at times! And I think you did a good Jon "mashing them together", as you said.


:iconallthethingsplz: ALL THE WATER BEARERS!
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Omg your autocorrect made "job" into "Jon" and I got an image of JonTron on YouTube throwing a bunch of vases full of water around holy shit I'm dying of laughter in my head right now.
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kushamisaru Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
OH GOD. WHY AUTOCORRECT. WHYYYYYYYYYY
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Emily-A Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013
So beautiful :love: And the language you use is amazing :D:heart:
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much, I am glad you liked it!
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Emily-A Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013
I loved it :D
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