Sometimes I like to pretend,I'm like the Mariana Trench with my words.
That my fingers construct such eloquence,as abyssal and profound as the Grand Canyon.
Yet the truth of the matter is that, my heart has not been pulverized into dust.
I am about as succint and poignant,as a rusted bucket.












as a rusted bucket."
I liked how you put that succinctly and poignantly.
Human emotions are those which people experience every day. The emotions people feel after a tragic event, a heartbreak, or something similar are certainly just as human and very powerful, but they are not representative. That you have not experienced certain situations does not make you any less capable of expressing profound thought and powerful emotion. The proof of the pudding is in the eating, and the proof of your words is in the reading. You did not happen on these words by accident.
We can't all expect to be those sort of people where they just have that gift to keep you on the edge of your seat. Because heck, I'm not. But you... you do have depth in your writing and that way of making people want to read more and more.
I'm actually reading World is Ours at the moment. It's freaking addictive.Good luck with your writer's block. It's a nasty thing.
I miss WIO...I need to go back and edit it...
I love the story. It's so original, and America is hilarious. XD