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Dreams will slowly fade
as dawn breaks through the windows;
morning’s here again.

ii.
Stomachs growl and groan
as smells from the kitchen waft;
afternoon is here.

iii.
Dusk paints a red sky,
the sun retires for the night;
evening shall bring peace.

iv.
The stars and moon dance,
a waltz of shining passion;
night has come at last.
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Just a dumb little haiku series I wrote for creative writing. I figured I'd upload it here to prove to everyone how much I suck at haikus. :| And tankas. I can't write those either.

But creative writing really is a fantastic class for me, since I'm given so many different ways to write as an outlet.

I can't wait until the prose unit. Then maybe I'll actually get around to actual stories instead of fanfictions.
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!sherlock-status Jan 30, 2013  Student Writer
I've always hated haikus... They are the bane of my existence...
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*PrussianPersephone Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Me too. :|
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These are fun :D

I like the first and third one the best.
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*PrussianPersephone Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I like the last one the best. All the others are dumb. :|
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~CrazyCharlette1415 Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice haiku series! :dance: Very thoughtful! I'm pretty sure most of us (if not all) can relate to the third haiku. ^^
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*PrussianPersephone Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I thought it was dumb D:
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~tommyboywood Jan 29, 2013  Professional Writer
Not dumb at all, rather nice
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*PrussianPersephone Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aha, thanks.
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*GermanyXItaly1000 Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
... wonderful! I love this piece!

Haiku, huh? ... I can never write haiku. I just write in prose.

So I applaud you even more! :iconepicclapplz:
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*PrussianPersephone Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's so baaaad though. You should see other pieces by people. Good lord they have talent. I'm a wannabe.
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